Friday, 8 July 2011

Torrential Downpour

Rain bounces from the shiny wet pavement. Dynamic water droplets leaping back up into the waiting air. Branches bend and glossy leaves act as funnels - channelling the water down into kinetic puddles, where the frenetic water continues to dance.

"Arriving at one point is the starting point to another." - John Dewey


Barb said...

Heavy rain - its own rock band! I've been experiencing it here in CO, USA, too! Keep dry and have a great weekend.

Susannah said...

Thanks Barb, and thanks for visiting too. It is good to see you here. :-)

Jinksy said...

It's like the drops struggle to get back to the sky from which they fell...

Susannah said...

That is just what I thought Jinksy! :-)

Elizabeth said...

Love the rhyme of kinetic and frenetic. Captures the image, the sound, and the movement.


Susannah said...

Thanks Elizabeth. :-)

Mark Holloway said...

I really like your style of Captured Moments here, Susannah. Like haibun, but with quotations instead of haiku. Intriguing.

Susannah said...

Thanks very much Mark. :-)

Good to see you here.

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